Bobby completed revising the rough draft of his essay on Holden Caulfield as an unreliable narrator in"The Catcher in the Rye". He evidenced strong mastery in the proper use of commas and capitalization and made some very worthwhile changes to his word usage. We then discussed the use of parallel structure in the complex sentence. As Bobby is reading the novel for his regular Language Arts class, we will continue writing about some of the novel's dominant themes this week.