We continued revising Bobby's essay on "Catcher in the Rye". Bobby 's essay proposed some good ideas which we expanded upon today. Further, I again provided instruction on avoiding pronouns without clear antecedents . We then worked on misplaced modifiers, proper word choice ,and formal usage in a literary essay. With some prompting ,Bobby evidences good mastery of the appropriate vocabulary for a written essay.We last discussed quotes to incorporate in the conclusion and began revisions of the final paragraph which we will complete tomorrow.