After Bobby completed a rough draft of his composition on Shakespeare and the Elizabethan theatre , he questioned how to better organize his draft. Today, we reviewed all of his notes and his draft and discussed how to combine his material into organized paragraphs. Bobby then reorganized his draft so that all of his material on The Globe Theatre and the Elizabethan production values were contained in a single paragraph after which he eliminated any duplicative ideas or material. We then studied his sentences to remove any redundancies or colloquial expressions . Bobby brings a very receptive attitude to the rewriting process and is able to constructively edit his work with some assistance . We will have this project completed next session.