Jayne shared her most recent and up-to-date version of her creative writing story, "The Box in the Garden" to be checked for editing and proper applications of the standards and conventions of grammar. She is receptive to suggestions and edits and revised as necessary. We review rules of grammar if there is evidence that practice in a specific area may be beneficial regarding her ability to apply accepted standards of conventional language. Jayne uses precise word choice in her writing and writes with confidence and clarity.