Jayne showed me the maze in the video game about which she wrote in yesterday's class. It is called the Mimic Hiachi's maze. She explained the directions she provided in the expository writing she submitted in yesterday's class in far greater detail than she wrote. We reviewed her writing and added the details that would have improved her writing sample. Jayne understood how the additions would have improved the clarity and objective of the essay; however, she admitted it was easier to talk about it than to write about it.