During our first sessions, Nina wrote a comprehensive essay analyzing and comparing two poems as her final unit assessment. During our last session, we worked on revising and editing the essay . We addressed drafting and incorporating a strong thesis statement into the opening paragraph , reorganizing paragraphs, and adding textual support aligned with the composed thesis statement. We further discussed what inferences readers might draw about the two poets' view of mortality and how those inferences could be a source of commentary for the conclusion.