As JP had difficulty on the Unit 5 test, we today reviewed his exam. I first addressed how to improve the essay by commenting on how the evidence supported the thesis. I explained in the absence of any commentary his evidence was not relevant as on its face the evidence did not support the argument.I further addressed how to particularize his thesis . Further, we addressed the subject-verb agreement problems . Next, we studied all of the multiple choice questions. I provided instruction on dissecting the nuance between the multiple choice responses , as well as strategies for determining how to answer questions on the proper use of transitional words and paragraph organization. After I explained the logic of the correct responses ,JP felt better prepared to tackle these difficult AP questions,