We reviewed and edited Matthew's homework assignment answering stylistic questions on Sherman Alexie's short story,"Indian Education." We spent a significant amount to time addressing and revising word choice, and awkward stylistic syntax.I further provided instruction on reorganizing a paragraph comparing syntactical structure within one section of the story.Additionally, we worked on incorporating critical AP descriptive terms such as syntax, diction, line of reasoning, and parallelism. We then commenced analyzing our next passage, a speech delivered by the Prime Minister of New Zealand after a church massacre. We focused on the rhetorical situation and how the opening paragraphs create trust and ethos in the audience.