We reviewed and edited Max's character analysis essay on "To Kill A Mockingbird ." I demonstrated how to include textual details to bolster the character analysis and how to comment on the relevance of the setting to the character of Mrs Duboise, a gothic character. Max then made edits and revisions including adding and properly embedding textual material into his characterization. We further explored how the enigmatic symbol of the camellias might be included in this characterization.