I continued instruction on writing an AP style interpretative essay by reviewing Joshua's essay homework from last evening. As we had already created a thesis ,I first demonstrated how to complete a first paragraph by establishing a line of reasoning or preview of the techniques that will provide the evidence in the body of the essay. After we reviewed the body of Joshua's essay , I demonstrated how to add cohesive commentary so as to avoid merely summarizing the passage. We further discussed how to interpret the passage evidence in a manner that supports the thesis . Last, I provided ideas regarding how to draft a brief conclusion that broadens the essay thesis.