During the first segment, we reviewed my comments to Kailtin's essay test.She did a very good job on the essay. I went over my comments demonstrating how to maintain present tense consistency and where and how to incorporate additional quotes and textual support.. Next, we discussed the Leonbergers surprisingly cold disinterested response to the return of their niece, Johanna as well as a neighbor's admonition to Capt Kidd not to leave Johanna with her family. We noted that the Leonbergers previously mistreated a nephew , and we discussed the culture's ethos that strongly discourages getting involved in another family's business, regardless of the circumstances. I continue to have Kaitlin locate and cite textual support for our discussion topics.