Blaize again did not work on the paper on his own time, and in class, tried to rush through just to get it done. He finished his first draft, but completely failed to follow the assignment. I asked him to compare and contrast the himself to Holden Caulfield, which he addressed in his thesis statement, but then all he did was give a character analysis of Holden. I gave him a choice, he could get graded on the paper as is, or he could go back and fix it for a better grade. He chose to fix it.