Go over beginning of story…make changes as needed. Discuss the plot - brainstorm ideas (problems) and how to resolve them. Continue writing rough draft. Will made several changes in the story…made suggestions for the plot and ending as well. He is very sensitive, for example, one line in the story was that a boy said he "hated" a movie; Will said that "hate" was too harsh and changed it to "didn't like" the movie. He has had more ideas and been more involved in this story than others we have done. Good session.