Punctuation review: commas, semi colons, colons, quotation marks, and capitalization
Lesson Outline
Jesse and I and Adrianna worked with a powerpoint that provided lessons on punctuation. I provided real life examples and analogies in order to improve retention levels. This took the entire hour to cover all the uses of the different topics. They are to take home the handouts in order to practice, which we will review tomorrow. Adrianna and I also quickly reviewed her paragraph that was well-written save a few grammatical errors. We also discussed the literature book that they want to read for the literature aspect of our lessons. I have ordered their literature book as I plan to cover literature together. Their ability to discuss the literature at home in class will prove most beneficial. They chose to read Mark Twain's Huckleberry Finn. Composition writing will be done separately as the girls are somewhat on a different level. Jesse's book offers more at home exercises in developing paragraphs and modes, where Adrianna's jumps right into the essays and reading comprehension.
Assignment
Comma and punctuation exercise
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
The lesson went wonderfully. The girls appreciate my silly examples, and teaching grammar was never so enjoyable! Adrianna's paragraph was very well-written (as I anticipated.) I look forward to beginning the literature section, as both girls have wonderful ideas and insight. I will be finished with the three separate syllabi: one for literature, two composition in reference with their books by Friday.
Jared did well on a vocabulary test of words in Emerson's writing.
We then discussed uniquely American themes, such as the worth of the individual in an industrial world and the role of intuition in a scientific world.
Assignment
Read Thoreau's Walden Pond
Session Minutes
120
Minutes Student Attended
120
Lesson Comments
Jared is catching on to the importance of writing in creating social change.
Take quiz and review answers. Review paragraph writing packet covering topic sentences and supporting details. Review worksheets on time order and emphatic order focusing on transitions and coherence. Review Martha Graham worksheet on syntax and coherence along with editing for grammar.
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
Both girls did well on the test. The paragraph packets proved most useful in their understanding their discernment between what makes for an effective topic sentence versus one that is an announcement or mere statement that limits one's ability to write a well developed paragraph. We discussed how to achieve coherence and unity.
Jared reviewed characterization, the first part of an exposition description of a piece of writing, and applied it to Mark Twain's Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. I also reviewed a piece of writing he had done on his own. With minor mechanical exceptions, the piece is clearly written.
Assignment
Read the Calavaras Jumping Frog short story by Mark Twain
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
Jared seemed unusually distracted today, although because he is bright, he was able to participate in the creation of an exposition of Mark Twain's writing.