Natalie submitted a revision from her rough draft of last week that is a definite A. She revised much of it very precisely, missing only a few things. I'm teaching her how to integrate citations in MLA format that are woven in, rather than full sentence quotes. Even with these, she must remember how to lead up to the quote with a signal phrase. Her Works Cited page looks very good now as well. Natalie is preparing to write her next essay on To Kill a Mockingbird, due in two weeks. She completed vocabulary from Mockingbird and a beginning of book quiz.