Took a close look at Vlad's "Three Men in a Cave" essay. Discussed particular ways the essay could be improve. Implemented changes in wording and phrasing.Taught appropriate grammar and punctuation lessons. Took a close look at Vlad's "Donald Trump" essay. Discussed how to set up a better introductory paragraph, how to set a question as the thesis for the paper, how the title and the thesis establishes the writer's promise to the reader. Discussed how the Trump essay could be organized and what would go into developing each section of the paper. Last, discussed the purpose of the concluding paragraph and how it could be structured.