Worked on Vlad's Portrait Paper. Discussed organization, development, phrasing, wording, punctuation. Went over edition points. Went through the importance of providing specific details. Illustrated... have everything in a piece of writing (a poem, a short story, an essay) must contribute to the mood, the tone, the plot, the argument, the conclusion all the details and arguments are leading up to...We had time to critique the opening paragraph of his Trump Essay.