Session Date
Lesson Topic
Making essays better
Lesson Outline
Re: Tupac Essay: Working on proofreading skills. Questioned Vlad on sequencing of sentences; packaging like topics; keeping to the thesis and the paper's organization announced in the thesis. Re: Trump Essay: Went over mechanical errors that keep cropping up -- punctuation, capitalization, etc. Went over where wording needed to be improved. Went over part two of essay and organizing the answer to Who is controlling Trump's image?
Assignment
Vlad to email me completed Trust Paper
Session Minutes
120
Minutes Student Attended
120
Lesson Comments
Vlad making slower progress than I predicted. He has the ideas and the arguments, but his language arts skills are not at a high school senior level. He needs to write and proofread his work for errors. Eventually, he will stop making the errors. He needs to write and proofread, write and proofread, write and proofread.
Session Hours
2.00
Hours Attended
2.00
Entry Status
Review Status
Student Name(s)
Subject
School