Discussed the concept of writing several drafts and the time needed to perfect the organization and development of a good essay. Carefully, went through Vlad's second draft of his Trump paper. Went through wording and word choice in Core Paragraph 1. Core Paragraph 2 very underdeveloped.We worked on what would help develop the paragraph and added those suggestions. Core Paragraph 3 needed a little additional wording.Core Paragraph 4 begun but underdeveloped. Vlad to read NYTimes article on Trump and Twitter. Vlad outlined Trump and Twitter paragraph, Trump rallies used for promoting his image and his accomplishments. Closing paragraph needed re-organization to match organization of the Core Paragraphs.