Session Date
Lesson Topic
Critical Thinking / Revision of Body Paragraph on *The Inner Ring*
Lesson Outline
We read through Sophia's edited introduction paragraph and body paragraph. We focused especially on her thesis statement.
Assignment
Revise the body paragraph and write the conclusion paragraph
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
Sophia is consistently showing diligence. She is dedicated to the "mental labor" of expressing abstract concepts. She realized, as we dicussed her thesis statement, that distilling this statement is usually the hardest part of an essay/communication. She demonstrated great focus as she tried to weed out irrelevant details and sought only to concisely state her main point.
Session Hours
1.00
Hours Attended
1.00
Entry Status
Review Status
Student Name(s)
Subject
School