Olivia continued to revise her college essay/personal statement as well as her test essay on the novel,"Daisy Miller". With respect to the literary essay, we worked on adding additional textual support and ensuring proper use of MLA citations . Likewise, we read over the personal statement and discussed areas where the language could be clarified or where additional details could enhance the essay. Olivia completed the personal essay and will finish the rewrites on the "Daisy Miller " essay tomorrow. We will then begin our British poetry unit.