Session Date
Lesson Topic
Conclusion and Revision of Three-Paragraph Essay
Lesson Outline
We revised some clunky sections into more clear sentences. There were some run-ons, but she revised them handily. Her conclusion was excellent with little to no revision.
Assignment
Submit a final draft three-paragraph essay on *The Inner Ring*
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
Raport seems to be strengthening as she "learns" me and as I "learn" her. Sophia is an agressive thinker and can execute the fruit of her thought process on paper. At first, she was a bit resistant to the idea of revising her first draft, but she has grown in accepting that reality.
Session Hours
1.00
Hours Attended
1.00
Entry Status
Review Status
Student Name(s)
Subject
School