Vlad and I had to move his paper forward. He made no progress since our last class. We started with his own three paragraphs analyzing Rembrandt's painting "The Anatomy Lesson." He has a block quote from one art critic. That paragraph we had to set up using the three parts of The Sandwich. We then discussed Joseph Wright's painting "Experiment of a Bird in an Air Pump." It took time to analyze all the people in the painting for the suggestiveness of their faces and body language, but we got three paragraphs written analyzing Wright's painting. Did a lot of mechanical editing along the way. Vlad for Wednesday is to add: Title, introductory paragraph, three block quotes from art critics, and end with a concluding paragraph.