Abby and I revised and edited part of her essay. We then revised the thesis statement. Abby decided that some of the textual evidence that she had selected for her essay was not the best.We discussed what constitutes good textual evidence. So she chose some better textual evidence. We discussed how to use the textual evidence and how to analyze it. We discussed the difference between summarizing and analyzing. Abby will finish drafting her essay for homework.