Showed Vlad how to incorporate a quote from Cathy Meyer, add additional statement following quote from Gabbi Shaw, and find another reliable source for a final quote from Sam Marguiles. Went over all Vlad's use of "The Sandwich" to see of all three parts of the Sandwich were used every time Vlad block quoted. Thought through the final argument: Vlad personal opinion that all divorces happen because of one or both partners feeling unhappy, when one partner says, "I'm unhappy" (or words to that effect), and the spouse asks, "How unhappy are you?" Vlad's thesis: The couple at that point have already decided their marriage is over. Worked on concluding paragraph. Reminded Vlad of the superstructure we used for this paper: Some people believe... Other people argue....Still other people claim.... I would suggest.... Give credit first to what other people have said (the "conversation") that was ongoing before you arrive. Then you can give your opinion, having shown respect to other people. Last, checked Vlad's Works Cited page and corrected errors.