We reviewed Bobby's essay response to last week's test question during today's session.I first provided instruction on how use the prompt to formulate a. topic sentence, to be followed by an explanation of the quoted material. In. this regard, we closely examined the quoted material and discussed ways to reword the quote into Bobby's own words. I then directed attention to the various parts of the essay prompt and pointed out that the essay, as submitted, did not address all of the questions posed by the essay question. Bobby determined how he could elaborate on his essay answer to remedy this oversight. Last, we looked at the grammar issues. .Bobby corrected run-ons, fragments, missed commas and missing capitalization. As we made good progress during class, I assigned completing the essay revisions for tonight's homework.