Today's session was a writing lesson using Bobby's ch 4 study guide quiz as a basis . We first discussed the need for and use of capitalization and corrected improper capitalization followed by instruction on using commas to set off introductory phrases. Next, we addressed the proper use of apostrophes . Having addressed punctuation, we then focused on rewriting and combining sentences mostly to avoid awkward tense usage and overuse of generalities . With respect to the substantive responses, I provided suggestions and text pages to assist Bobby in revising his substantive answers to adequately answer the questions. For homework, finish reading ch5 and completed study guide questions,.