During today's session, Atticus completed his draft essay on "The Boy in the Striped Pajamas." We worked collaboratively on composing a third paragraph with textual support and on forming a conclusion paragraph . Atticus has been very cooperative and working diligently on this task throughout the week. After reading through the draft, we began addressing how to edit a draft.We first corrected a subject-verb agreement error and then worked on rephrasing and combing two sentences using the subordinate conjunction "although."