We worked on editing and revising Atticus' draft essay on "The Boy in the Striped Pajamas." I first provided instruction on how to correct vague pronoun references and how to correct sentence fragments. We then identified these issues within the draft and discussed how to revise these sentences. We further noted cohesion issues. Atticus then began editing and redrafting the first paragraphs of the essay. Towards the end of the period , we reviewed Atticus' homework on the introduction to our next novel," A Long Walk to Water." I provided suggestions to improve his homework answers and demonstrated how to search for and locate relevant information on Google.