After we reviewed techniques and elements that can be included in a conclusion to an essay,Carson completed his essay on hate speech by writing a final paragraph. He did very well in recognizing how to use rhetorical questions, a call to action, and a provocative thought or image to conclude his essay. After he completed his work, we edited his work to address pronoun agreement, superfluous words and a run-on sentence. Carson quickly recognized how to address these style and grammar issues. Last, we reviewed Carson's homework answers analyzing the use of evidence in an argumentative essay in the Lit book.Again,his work was very good.