Session Date
Lesson Topic
Essay Writing and Revisions
Lesson Outline
During today's session, we noted how Carson's conclusion to his essay on hate speech diverted from his original thesis. As a review of cited evidence often leads the writer to a conclusion that differs from the original idea, we discussed how to revise a thesis statement based on the evidence. Carson then rewrote his thesis statement to align with his conclusion.
Session Minutes
45
Minutes Student Attended
30
Lesson Comments
Carson planned to be online but his computer was not working. He tried to connect on his phone but I was not able to hear him notwithstanding that my mic was not muted or otherwise inoperable. In any event, I had to end class early as it was impossible to continue given the technological issues. Carson also will be absent (not even online) on Monday.
Session Hours
0.75
Hours Attended
0.50
Entry Status
Review Status
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Subject
School