We completed James' FLVS assignment on the application of the 4th Amendment. First, we completed the thesis statement and discussed why the thesis properly constitutes a debatable claim. James then addressed the next part of the assignment , applying his news article to the 4th Amendment by asserting a position contrary to the thesis. We discussed various contra arguments to the thesis to incorporate into the paragraph. .After James completed his work, we addressed edits and revisions. We focused on academic word choice as well as the use of "that/which/ and who.