Today we completed Kaitlin's essay comparing industrialization patterns in the US and Britain. I first addressed some historical inaccuracies in her draft as well as sentence repetition . We then discussed government support of industrialization in both countries and how the difference in geography impacted government support. Kaitlin then incorporated our discussions into the third paragraph of her essay. I provided assistance on word choice and parallel construction .Last, we addressed the conclusion both as a summary and as vehicle to offer a general observation which I modeled for review.