Brandon received very good feedback on the first draft of his Definition paper. Mainly, the grader commented on the first smaller body paragraphs, prompting Brandon to elaborate on some components of Strategic Management as though he were unfamiliar with the concept. This meant that Brandon had to define sub-terms and explain how they helped to compose the bigger picture that is Strategic Management. I was very proud of how the grader lauded Brandon's "smooth, expert use of the English language."