Brandon read through a peer copy of the Definition paper Draft #2, noting the strengths and weaknesses of the student's approach. Brandon concluded that Zach R. needed to spend some time providing evidence for the claims the writer made about gestures in different cultural contexts. Also, the author's argument was not clearly stated in the first paragraph. After Brandon finished his review, we began his Week 7 assignments in the hope of getting a week ahead before starting his history class on Monday, 10/21.