Session Date
Lesson Topic
Students worked on last draft of essay
Lesson Outline
present last draft of essay to class
make 2 good and 2 helpful comments to each classmate
get teacher feedback
discuss what to do when right at the end it "seems all wrong". Show students how to salvage what you've done without throwing it all out. We used Sadie's paper as the example as she was feeling lost. Show students how to pretend to be an outside reader of your own paper. WRite topic and main point of each paragraph in margin? Most issues can be resolved by strengthening intro paragraph and first sentence of each paragraph.
make 2 good and 2 helpful comments to each classmate
get teacher feedback
discuss what to do when right at the end it "seems all wrong". Show students how to salvage what you've done without throwing it all out. We used Sadie's paper as the example as she was feeling lost. Show students how to pretend to be an outside reader of your own paper. WRite topic and main point of each paragraph in margin? Most issues can be resolved by strengthening intro paragraph and first sentence of each paragraph.
Assignment
Have final copy to me on MOnday
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
I think we made a ton of progress. Students left feeling confident.
Session Hours
1.00
Hours Attended
1.00
Entry Status
Review Status
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