Juvi 3 book report

I finally got the chance to read the book this weekend, and was struck by how far off the story Clay was in our discussions last week. He clearly filled in a lot of gaps on his own. But we were able to make appropriate changes and get to work on the body paragraphs. Clay's 2nd paragraph of the day was an improvement on the first as he got a better idea of what "details" are important to include. We should have him in good shape y