edit paragraphs
how to write and introduction

We edited Clay's paragraphs about JBP. He did a solid job writing and editing, but is still having trouble identifying a lot of the mistakes in his sentence structure. As soon as you point on out to him, he can correct it. But we need to work to get him to the point where he does it on his own. We then talked about how to write and introduction, which really plagues him. We'll continue to work on it.