5 paragraph essay prompt

Clay definitely had some trouble with writing the 5 paragraph essay prompt. He's come a long way in terms of his sentence structure and punctuation, but still has room for improvement. He needs to focus more on writing good sentences every time, and not rushing to get finished. That's usually when his mistakes come about. On the bright side, he usually is able to correct the mistakes once I point them out. HIs biggest challenge here was thinking of material to say, and fully developing that idea. I helped him come up with ideas about the first two body paragraphs, but the one he did on his own had three different topics. We will focus on developing ideas next week.