Today Patrick completed his descriptive writing paper. He went through each structure card after reading his writing piece. He wanted to ensure he included at least one detail that pertained to all of his structure words. After doing so, he realized he didn't give his audience any kind of time (when) to visualize his story. He added this and made some minor changes. Patrick completed publishing this and has the choice to share with his peers. He is deciding how and when now he would like to do so. Great work!!