review paragraphs
verb agreement

Clay only had two paragraphs completed and both needed a lot of work. The first paragraph had a solid topic sentence, but he failed to fully develop the idea or give examples. In the second paragraph, he just jammed three topics together and had no topic sentence or development. We talked about what he needed to improve and how he could fix them. We'll see what he hands in on Friday. As for the verb agreement, he's doing very well on the worksheets and I expect it to improve in his writing.