Session Date
Lesson Topic
5 paragraph essay
Lesson Outline
edit 5 paragraph essay
Today we worked on editing and revising the 5 paragraph essay Cal wrote on Wednesday. We spent a lot of time on the introduction, as that seems to be an area that gives Cal trouble. He tends to write with short and very direct sentences, which hurts him in his intros. He needs to work on keeping them as general as possible and saving his specific statements and examples for the body paragraphs. His spelling is solid, but definitely could improve, but I was very pleased with his attempts to use different kind of sentences to improve the flow of his writing.
Today we worked on editing and revising the 5 paragraph essay Cal wrote on Wednesday. We spent a lot of time on the introduction, as that seems to be an area that gives Cal trouble. He tends to write with short and very direct sentences, which hurts him in his intros. He needs to work on keeping them as general as possible and saving his specific statements and examples for the body paragraphs. His spelling is solid, but definitely could improve, but I was very pleased with his attempts to use different kind of sentences to improve the flow of his writing.
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Session Hours
1.00
Hours Attended
1.00
Entry Status
Review Status
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Subject
School