read/review/discuss Hamlet paper

Will had his paper finished and ready to hand in today. For the most part, I am very pleased with his efforts. He hasn't written a lot of papers, but he followed instructions and his outline very well. He came up with some really interesting ideas, and actually had a few really powerful and well-written lines. Like most 10th graders, his weakness is not fully developing his ideas. If he had taken the time to expand on his points, (use multiple paragraphs) it would have been an excellent paper. Nonetheless, I'm very pleased with his effort and how well he's handled Hamelt. Great work!!