Session Date
Lesson Topic
Discuss reasons for revisions in Character Description
Lesson Outline
We read over and discussed my revision suggestions on Joey's first draft. Some of the things we discussed were writing for an audience, trite expressions, combining sentences and appropriate word usage. Joey began typing his second draft.
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
Joey was much more amenable to the work of revising than previously.
Session Hours
1.00
Hours Attended
1.00
Entry Status
Review Status
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Subject
School