Katya decided to Skype in today. We worked together to revise her graffiti paragraph, with emphasis on the following: avoiding run-ons, affect vs. effect, using semi-colons to join closely related sentences, the expression "all of a sudden" (not "all the sudden"), using "different from" (not "different than"), and READING ALOUD as a method of detecting needed revisions. HW: Type a polished revision of this assignment to submit tomorrow -- along with the original version containing revision notes we made today.