Will chose to continue to work on his essay on Thoreau's Walden instead of beginning a new text --and what great work he did! He was able to edit his sentences. On his own, Will decided to excise all of the first person references in the draft, like "I think that" and "My opinion is," and even decided that Thoreau's emphasis on needs over wants needed to be qualified. After all, Thoreau's want was to find out how to live more meaningfully and some wants are good, like the quest for knowledge or a cure for disease. Great job, Will!