Will completed the first college application essay about what he wanted Mitchell College to know about him and what made him unique. He did a fabulous job! The essay clearly lets the reader know that Will is hardworking, responsible, and sets many goals for himself. He was able to share his learning style, passion for photography, outside of school interests - all within the 250 word limit. He had to edit and be very careful about his word choice and rose to the challenge! He seems a lot more comfortable with changing words and revising, which he found more difficult in the past. I am so pleased with his progress.