Will completed his second essay for Mitchell College today. He had completed the rough draft for homework and in class revised and edited his essay. He also did a final edit for grammar and syntax of his first essay. Next, we began a study of descriptive paragraphs. We reviewed sensory details and brainstormed topics for a descriptive paragraph. Will chose to write about the fires he saw from his house in Colorado. For homework, Will is going to generate a list of sensory details he can use in his essay.