Today in class, Will shared his thoughts about his meeting with the college counselor and the suggestions that were offered to improve his essay. He worked on modifications and had a sense of clarity as to why he needed to change the essay a bit. The revision process was difficult at first, however, as we went along he seemed to have a better sense of why and how he needed to revise it. He was concerned about not getting to other topics and seemed a bit anxious about spending “so long” on one piece of writing. He completed the revised draft, and we will be making final edits on it at our next meeting.