Will did a great job revising his essay about the "Colorado Wild Fires". He felt comfortable making revisions, which is an area that he had difficulty with in the past. Will shared that he felt he was really improving as a writer and I agree with his assessment. The assignment for the Colorado Wild Fires centered around using good descriptive language and sensory details. He made his edits and revisions on paper and now needs to enter it on his computer. In addition, he needs to work on his concluding paragraph. I asked him to consider a couple questions when writing his final paragraph. First, were the fires brought under control while he was at his vacation house? Also, did he feel it was safe towards the end of his visit? Will needs to finish his edits and draft the concluding paragraph for homework.